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Post by 42Satesiri094 on Sat Sep 14, 2019 9:49 pm

Actually, I don't like composing any poems at all! LOL When I was a high school student, my Thai language teacher always told me to compose a poem. I felt like OMG again?! I don't like this sense of aesthetics! However, I studied a haiku in Children's Literature class, I started to love it a bit since this kind of poem contains 17 syllables. This is my haiku:

"The sun is radiant and bright.
Here comes the light
Shine through to show a day.
Heat touches my skin.
My head begins to spin.
Oh, gleam is everywhere.
The sun is blurred and dim.
Bye, it says at the rim.
Fade to show a night."

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Post by 42piyakamol024 on Sat Sep 14, 2019 11:58 pm

I have to admit that I really do not like any form of poems but I have to compose it. "Shout out to the duck" is my first haiku. I took around 20 minutes to compose it. At that time, I really wanted everyone to know that I really didn't enjoy composing it. A word "fxxk" suddenly came into my mind while I was composing a haiku. And I just wanted to have this word in the haiku. By the way, I finally decided to use the word 'duck' instead of 'fxxk'. Here is my haiku:

"Haiku is a duck
Now it’s stuck in my head
Oh, my life has no shade.
I realize I’m tired
Haiku is inside my mind
Oh, it makes me cry.
This time I close my eyes
Haiku is still on my mind
Don’t cry, it’s just nine lines."

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Post by 42Grittawit003 on Tue Sep 17, 2019 8:08 pm

Well, I quite like composing some poems. This time, I have a chance to compose 'Haiku' poem.
I think it is very easy and fun to work with Haiku. So, I make fun of my Haiku poem which is named 'work with Haiku'.
Here is my Haiku.

"Haiku is my work.
And it makes me look so jerk.
Lay down on the earth.

My work is not done.
At first it looks very fun.
Here it comes, the sun.

Haiku will end here.
I work without any fear,
But with all my tear."

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Post by 42Temsiri054 on Wed Sep 18, 2019 5:35 pm

Of course, I love it.
Haiku is my new experience in term of linguistics.
This is what I wrote for my Haiku, Cheesecake.
My oh My cheesecake---
Take a minute to bake,
Juicy crunchy white.
Sweety sour yummy---
I taste the strawberries
Jam glazed that I like.
Smelling milky cheese---
Think of eating in light breeze
The best friends in a bite.

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Post by 41Hathaichanok081 on Thu Sep 19, 2019 4:24 pm

Not really. However, I also compose Haiku poem.
It's called "Rain and Tears".

Rain looks like the tears.
When it rains, people feel blue.
Loneliness appears.
Rain does never last.
It will surely go sometime
same as lonely heart.
Tears look like the rain.
They normally come and go.
Just smile for this show!

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Post by 42pacharakamola025 on Thu Sep 19, 2019 5:11 pm

I like to compose the Haiku poetry because it is not complex. It is unneccessary to have the rhymes.
Here is my Haiku. I imagine when I was eating pan seared salmon.
Salmon from Japan
Caught by the old fisherman
Sizzling in the pan.
Deep orange sweet
This is a love at first bite
Smooth as warm cheese.
Eating one tiny piece
Imagine sailing on sea
My mind feels the peace.

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Post by 42nutcha050 on Sat Sep 21, 2019 10:06 am

Of course, I like to create a haiku. My haiku is about nature.
Cloud in the sky
A beautifully sunshine
As if paradise
Cricket in the ground
Many leaves are falling down
Grass gracefully dance
What a nice nature
Still sublime forever
And need protection

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Post by 42piyathida060 on Sat Sep 21, 2019 3:14 pm

At first sight, I thought haiku is a very difficult pome. However, I can create my haiku poem.
My haiku is about "secretly love somebody".

Vanilla sky

Oh! Vanilla sky
Shine in my eyes
Like you are first guy in my heart
We sit under rainbow
Look at it dancing slow
How happy we are
Look at flowers around us
They are excited as much
Wake me up now!

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Post by 42Pattaranan065 on Mon Sep 23, 2019 9:24 pm

I like to read it but I don't like to compose one. haha
Unfortunately in Children Literature class, the teacher assigned us, 4ENer, to compose Haiku poem with 3 stanza. Here is mine.

Shiny Christmas tree
with fancy lights shining bright
colorful tinsel toffee.

Big dining table
full of cake and gingerbread .
mommy baked bagels.

Presents laid on bed.
Daddy gave me cash and toy.
my heart full of joy.

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Post by 42Tapanee078 on Sat Sep 28, 2019 9:35 pm

Yes, I like Haiku because it is easy to compose. Haiku has only 3 lines and 17 syllables and it does not need to be rhymed.
This is my Haiku. It named "Twilight Love".

When pink plays with blue
The shade of twilight time
reminds sense of you

When sun kisses sky
Nothing worth than "you are mine"
I fall to your soul

When moon meets the star
Cold outside but heart is warm
Adores love of you

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Post by 41Thitiwad049 on Mon Sep 30, 2019 9:10 pm

I have no idea about it. I think Haiku is really odd poem in my thought. By the way, I have composed this kind of poem once in Children Literature class. I am really proud to present "sailing".

Sailing in deep sea
Thunder cut out horizon.
Waves cursh old big boat.

Sailing like ones' fate.
Obstrucles come.
Then, they fade away.

Again sailing see
Swim out fierce fang doom.
Till glory dawn comes.


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Post by 42pakaporn063 on Mon Sep 30, 2019 9:46 pm

Absolutely yes! I have book about Haiku and I really enjoy reading it.
I would like to present my haiku, it is about sky and soul.

"Above the sky---
I see many birds fly
Then they soar behind cloud.

Suddenly rain falls---
I hide next to the wall
Don’t wanna wet anymore.

Here comes the rainbow---
And a bright sunshine shows
To fulfill my pure soul."

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Post by 41nuttikan085 on Mon Sep 30, 2019 9:51 pm

Absolutely Yes!!!! I like it because it's very easy to create my own Haiku. This is mine.
"You are my sunshine
Rise upon to the sky
Brighten up my life

Without you I'll die
Please don't walk away from me
Stay and don't flee

Every dust till dawn
I always think about you
Do you miss me too?"

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Post by 42Peerapon027 on Mon Sep 30, 2019 10:06 pm

Not really. I have never ever composed some kind of poem before. I just learned poem from Children's literature in last two weeks ago. It is challenged for me because I never heard this poem before. However, I tried to conduct my Haiku poem as a homework. The poem is called Hello Summer!. This is my poem as follow:
Tik-Tok, the time flies
The sun moves around on the sky
Summer is coming

Beautiful sunrise
On a warm summer morning
I wait for day’s start

Sun bathing on the beach
My feeling is calm and peace
Oh!! I love summer!

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Post by 42hathaichanok040 on Mon Sep 30, 2019 10:09 pm

Yes, I do. This is my own Haiko.
My dearest sun

Rising up to the sky
The sun looks so shine
Greeting people around
It works in the summer
Being above the river
Glowing to the ground
Setting in the evening
I lost in dreaming
Waiting the sun to come


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Post by 42tanawat055 on Mon Sep 30, 2019 11:14 pm

I enjoyed composing Haiku a lot. To be honest, I could compose more than two Haiku, but I need to choose only one to send as an assignment. So, I choose this...
Haiku: My sunshine

You are my sunshine
That can light up my mind
Like the sun in the sky

I will clarify
My life is the sky
That be bright from sunlight

If you’re not by my side
I can’t be alive
Like sky losing the sun

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Post by 41Tananon017 on Mon Sep 30, 2019 11:22 pm

Every morning
The sun rises so high.
In the dawn upon the sky,
It widely shines around.

Birds lively fly out
living from hand to the mouth.
Every morning counts.

Birds, sun never default.
That means what life is about.
Morrow always comes.

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Post by 41supaporn001 on Tue Oct 01, 2019 12:34 am

I love it after I knew about the history of it and this is my first Haiku.
Sunflower is bright
Turn its face looking for sunlight
Oh, sunset dark come

Sunflower is wait
Never give up for sunset
Meet the sunlight again

Sunlight my lover
I will be your sunflower
Love and wait forever


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Post by 41wipawee028 on Thu Oct 31, 2019 5:16 pm

Yes, I like it because it easy to write. This is my first Haiku named "Summer wish"
In this summertime,
All the flowers bloom again.
Birds begin to fly.

Crystal clear blue sky,
The sun returns to power,
With fluffy white clouds.

Eating an ice cream,
Is always my only wish,
For this summertime.

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Post by 41chonlamas008 on Sun Nov 03, 2019 6:06 pm

Here is my HAIKU it is about Iron Man!

" Dear my Tony Stark
He is the light in the dark
Love you three thousand.
He is Ironman
Saving us like Superman
He died in the war
The world is asking
Who will be next Ironman
Of course, only him."

I love you so much, Tony. I still can't believe that you die.


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Post by 41Napat013 on Tue Nov 05, 2019 10:12 pm

Yes, I do.
I also have my own Haiku.
"No light from the moon
The moon that embraces the sun
Like some with no one

The night was so long
All things happened with silent
Gloom until first light

Then, the sun rises
Like me surrounded by you
Life begins so bright"

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Post by 42Praewpoy091 on Wed Nov 06, 2019 10:22 am

Virtually, I have heard haiku when I learn children's literature courses. The teacher asked everyone in the class to write it to her as a homework. So here is mine.
Life is the seasons
Weather changes for a reason
Come and pass all times

Summer is a hot pan
The clouds tear down as they can
Wait for next winter

When dark shadows fade
Sunshine is the warm gate
Welcome happiness

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